Today I have been going back into the past to find a day I couldn't quite get a grip on. Have you ever not been able to get a grip on a day? What day was it and what did you do?
Here is mine -
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wow, Zara! I am blown away by your amazing story. Even I could not write like that.'I love how descriptive you are about her not remembering what day it is.
ReplyDeleteThe day I could not get a grip on was on a Friday, mufti day and I still had to wear my uniform.
Wow Z, that is great. Love your descriptive story. Dad xx
ReplyDeleteI love this Zara, it kept me interested until the end, and I could then completely sympathise- I too have been caught out not having remembered it was school photo day! I loved the detail and the suspense you created, well done. Mrs D
ReplyDeleteHi Zara
ReplyDeleteHahaha! This is a great short story and kept me reading to the end. You wouldn't believe the number of people who forget about school photo day (including teachers). You created some real suspense here. Looking forward to reading more posts from you. :) Mrs Pascoe