Hey Bloggers,
This week was our first full week in lockdown since 2020, hopefully, it will be our last. This week has been awesome as the teachers have set us some really cool tasks, however, my favourite one was when we had to create a story that was out of this world (Literally!) We got to choose between four pictures to base our story off of what we saw. The picture I chose was of a man on the moon, so here is my story
Every step was pain, knowing that the oxygen was going to run out soon, all I could do is hold my breath, literally. I was so close, I could see the base only 60 metres to go. But then, the dreaded noise started, it meant I only had at the most 40 metres of oxygen, I wasn't going to make it back to the base. And because I was panicking my oxygen was running out faster, I only had 35 metres.
20 metres,
10 metres,
5 metres, I was still 20 metres to the base, I never imagined this would be how I die, sure I imagined aliens taking my oxygen away, or getting too close to the sun then blowing up. But I never thought I would just run out of oxygen, no tragic backstory, just me simply running out of oxygen. At least I was doing the job I loved right? “Well, this is the end for me,” I thought to myself until I heard them calling my name, I looked up and 5 metres away was my colleague with a brand new oxygen tank, they walked over to me and undid my current oxygen tank, which made me panic for a second but once they had given me the new tank I was fine. We walk back to the base and I forget all my worries, I am safe now, or so I think…...
Did you like the story? What are you doing in lockdown?
Stay Safe Bloggers!
Till Next Time!
Kia Ora Zara, Emerson here
ReplyDeleteI really like your story.I love how you put how may meters of breath you had. I have been doing story's as well.
Until next time bye:)
Kia Ora Zara, Dad here.
ReplyDeleteLove this story and your descriptive writing, it really drags you into the scene where you are wanting to get back to base before your oxygen runs out.
Awesome work :-)
Kia Ora Zara, Mum here
ReplyDeleteYour story has drama and kept me in suspense as to what was going to happen next. Loved it. Fantastic writing Zara x