The Galaxy
For free writing, we got to write a poem, I made this with Isabella and I put it in google translate in Hawaiian to see what it would come out as. Please comment on what you think of it and check out Isabella's blog as she did hers in a different language.
Original:
Up above, far away is where I wish to be today.
The stars they shine, bright through the night, letting off a beautiful light.
The galaxy holds the moons and the planets, a void of space and time.
We don't know why we're here, maybe it was destiny? Does someone in the galaxy have faith in me?
Maybe one day I will take the very first step, and the promise I made will have been kept.
After all, the world has their faith in me.
Translated
Above, where I want today. The stars shine at night, let loose a bright light.
Galaxy protects months and seasons, a lack of time and time. Do we not know why our place is here, or maybe it is a result? Has anyone in the summer believed me?
Maybe it's probably a day when I'm going to go first, and I've been talking about the word I've made.
After all, the world believes me.
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